Very very good! And I love that you used the word “skitter.” :D

This was really cool, it felt like watching an episode of “Myth Busters,” when they explode something and then slow it down so you can see it in detail. Great word choice here.

Another tragic exit from this world. Well done.
LoA

Impressive use of the second person perspective in this one. Definitely a solid job of the challenge’s apparent intent. I’m glad you entered and added your awesomeness to the fray.

Wow, I’m never surprised by your awesomeness. I also loved the well-used second person perspective.