Good job on the layers of interaction, what the character knows versus what they reveal to the other character.

I really wasn’t sure if it would “read” correctly to anyone other than me.
Thanks THX , I truly appreciate the feedback.

It read very well. Nice use of the italics to represent the internal monologue. Really, very well done.
Not sure I like “Two became as if one.” Something about the “as if” in that context doesn’t work right for me. And your last word should probably be “asked.” It will read better that way following the question mark.

It read just fine to me. You have an extra M in becoming, by the way.

very creative! good sci-fi ficlet.

very creative! good sci-fi ficlet.

Thanks Fantasy. I appreciate the feedback.

Sorry I’ve been behind on this, Kev. Catching up to you now, and I gotta tell you, man, you’re really getting me into this ficlet series. Awesome stuff!

I like the interplay between what the characters know and what they are willing to reveal to one another. Ker is quite the bright one, as well.