So I was right about Cole. The psychological type of monster. I like the heavy-handed knock. Wonder who it is.

Good stuff. The only problem I had was with the word “destable”. Did you mean destable, as in unstable? Or was “detestable” the word you were going for?

They make a pretty disturbing couple of characters, I gotta admit. I am also wondering who is at the door.

@JMSquire, someone/something with extraordinarily large hands I think. Tony Robbins maybe?

Thanks kaelinn18; I had meant it to be detestable. And thanks for the positive comments, guys. And those who’ve read the whole series probably have a fair guess who could be at the door.

Excellent job. I can feel the tention that must’ve been in there when all of the girls went silent. Once more the descriptiveness is captivating. Excellent work.

intense story. I wonder if cole and gordo are the same person.. very intriguing

intense story. I wonder if cole and gordo are the same person.. very intriguing

The series must go on, THX !