I think you lost me about 2/3 of the way through. She called the star by accident? The line that really threw me off was: “He waited for the bodily “thudâ? and her crying child to hang up.” Is this insinuating that she died or something?
Yeah, I hear ya. I had two endings & I liked this one more, but it is confusing.
I was confused by that line as well. Still though, I think the idea of a star getting wrong numbers is a pretty funny mental picture.
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