Reminded me a little of Grim Fandango for some reason. The only real similarity is that it’s the afterlife, so I’m not sure why I got that image.
Well told though. I’m glad you’re trying to stick to your Ficlet Fridays.

I really dig this. I need to write something spiritual.

Very cool.

This made me think of the Matrix having to be rebuilt because humans couldn’t cope with a perfect world. Only, this was less dire. I enjoyed it, nice work.