OK, stick a fork in this series… it’s done! I hope you’ve enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing. I want to thank everybody that commented on the series and provided help, especially you John Perkins. At some point I might pick it up and write another chapter or…
… better yet, why don’t you continue Ker and Dreanna’s story? I’ve left you with a badass ship (remember Worldbuilder class, can make anything) and a few interesting characters (hey, at least I think so) and a brand new universe to explore. So go ahead… surprise me, wow me. Thanks for reading Kev
You have an interesting setup here for a future adventure. However, the kiss at the end seemed forced to me, as there really isn’t any history between Ker and Dreanna to speak of. Also, you’ll want to put “an” in front of “unnamed nebula” instead of “a”.
@kaellinn – The kiss… I can see your point. I was kind of looking at it like this: a) I’d planned a bit more interaction leading up to and end it… curse you 1024 character limit! b) I saw it as a shipwrecked man and woman who gone through a lot together leading to more… c) She’s a hot, godlike Cougar now and he’s a tasty looking treat (sorry I couldn’t resist)
Congratulations on a great series! Honestly, I’m very proud and humbled to have had any (small) part in helping you along the way. I think you created some really interesting characters here and a very intriguing universe. Good luck with the manga, I look forward to reading it. Also, I don’t think the kiss was forced that much. I kind of got the shipwrecked thing. They’re alone in a strange place, it’s an “I’m really happy to be alive” kind of kiss.
Thanks John… don’t be humble. Seriously, I’d probably not have made it through to the end without your help… I’m bad at starting things and never finishing them too.
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