sweet.

i love where you are taking this. amazing the inspiration that can come from a random walk i had with my dogs.

your turn.

Neat story and interaction, but I got totally lost cause of the italics instead of quotes thing for the other guy. Makes it seem like you mean a disembodied voice or something.

ya can u just do quotes next time…the italics make it really confusing. but i like the characters…im just a little confused about the random guy in his house.

i was running out of spaces and i had an sourse that said you could use different type to accent different peoples dialogue, curse you 1024 spaces ,
but yeah it didn’t work like i wanted