People who write a sequel.. please write what you think his response would be. Thanks :)

Ok, but not written too well. You have a lot of simple sentences that you could probably combine to make the story sound a bit more fluent. I would also try making it a bit more dramatic. Right it’s just a girl’s slightly pathetic confession to the guy she likes. Still a nice effort though.

Ouch! I’m still wincing slightly from Saint Chuck’s whole slightly pathetic comment. Lol. It is true though. You should use more details, and you spelled opposite wrong, you might want to edit that.