Cool ficlet, I like the intensity of it.

haha this sucks.
I had to hurry and finish(:
Im gonna rewrite it… definantly haha

Okay, I like this one better then the original…=]=]=]=]
great job, you still captured the same emotion…

awh shit. :[
when tat happens i get sick.

dude i like die wen that happens hahaha i just expirenced it 2day…….