There we go. There’s a quick 3 for the beginning of the work week! I like how this scene has played out, and the story is really moving along at a good pace. Think I’ve about got the hang of the 1000-character limit.
“Fan-fucking-tastic.â? was my favourite phrase for a long time. Seeing it here made me grin. I personally don’t understand the purpose of the push off and slide at the start, I just chalked it up to the character being a little jumpy and unstable.
Yeah, the push and slide is just him getting away from the wall and making some room for a fight. He’s jumpy, definitely unstable and way out of his element with these guys. Love that phrase too, heh, and I had to throw it into one of these stories somewhere.
Think I’ve about got the hang of the 1000-character limit. I’d have to agree with that statement. Great series that you have running, interested to see where you take it.
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