Sorry about the slang usage, if anyone was silly enough to read this, I couldn’t help it. The tune wouldn’t work otherwise (which, of course, you’d be unable to tell since you can only read it…) Hopefully I didn’t kill any brain cells as you read this… lol.

I actually like this. send it to one of those contests where you get the chance to have one of your songs turned into a real one.

Ha, with a title like that…how could we not read it? I like the lyrics, though, sounds cool.

Ha, with a title like that…how could we not read it? I like the lyrics, though, sounds cool.

I like it. Of course, I didn’t have the tune but…. I still like it.

Sorry, this is gonna bug me, I think you spelled a couple words wrong. If not, well I’m not the brightest crayon. :)

yes, everytime technically isn’t a word, but I left it together because… er, I liked it. Lol and I left the g off coming for… artistic affect. lol. It sounds better with the tune, I was hoping that if anyone actually did read it, it would sort of convey the voice behind it.

(and ain’t was because isn’t didn’t work. too many syllables)

I really like this song, its really very nice. Good job! and using the words that really don’t exist is ok, it lets it flow.

amazing.. like most songs I can totally relate to the lyrics. thats what music does. it gives you something to identify with. Im curious tho, who sings this song?