Very nice. I like it :)

creepy depth to it! ah-mazing dah-ling! (fake attempt at being Cruella DeVille)
LoA

There’s something very Shakespeare about this. Methinks I like it!

It does sound Shakespeare-esque!

Like the end of a sonnet…

Sequeled =)

your sonnet has taken on dark and epic proportions!

wow!!!!!!! thats crazy awesome. i love it. its so short, yet so deep. :]