Rubber bracelets. You know, they still sell those things. Good entry. Nice interaction between him and the two girls. I think it should be “hairdo were the padded…” and “We’re not in Kansas anymore Toto.”
Oooo! Punks… great idea Pyro I need to work that into the next one. ;) @John… in this one was bouncing back and forth between “thing…was” and “things…were”. Also “You’re” was intentional in the last line because he is referring to himself as Toto. Keep the input coming!
Excellent! I remember the first day I saw the rubber bracelets resurface a couple of years ago. They just haven’t crept up the arm in the multiples in which we wore them… yet. ;)
@Jenunique, JLaughter & Six Feet – Thanks all, this one was really fun to write! I had to really dig back deep for both the dialog and the looks… found myself swimming in memories of the 80’s.
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