Ay Dios mio you are hysterical! ”… nevermind. It’s just a stick.” XD I can’t wait to see more!

Funny dialogue.. paranoid a bit he is.. and the end..

xD it’s a stick. Still lovin’ it! I forgot about this until I found your profile. so sorry!

Once again it’s already been broughtened. it’s been brought like bratwurst.(OK that was ridiculous) Good story though? But do i sense you are loosing momentum? can you do it again? I’ll stay tuned same ween time same ween channel when our ficlet rookie hero tries to ficnotize fellow ficliteerians with frequent frivolous free-flowing fabulously fictilistical fictitious ficlets.

What’s most amazing about this series thus far is the fact that it’s being told entirely through their conversation, no other narration. Great job, ‘cause it’s funny to boot!

I like how the conversation turns near the middle from discussion to accusation before ending in realization that it’s just stick. Gotta love paranoia.

omg this is hilariouss.