Again… totally Rad Jen! There is one small typo in the line “She she blew upward in a haughty bitch”, you have a double She.
Oh and nice work on both the “She almost turned her ankle” and “haughty bitch” lines.

Well caught Kev. I think Jen is doing this series justice.

@Pyro – I agree completely look like we both “branched” the story at the same time again… however this time we’re going in two different directions… BTW , I like your’s better Jen.

Okay.. fixed my she she.. :D Gotta go read yours.. Two directions is good. Gives others a chance to drop in on whichever they want to sequel.. (hint-hint)

Another great entry. You guys have really taken this somewhere fun.