The humor here is an interesting juxtaposition to the ominous tone of the previous ficlet. I can’t wait to see what happens “next!”

Love how the burger smashes him, I can just picture it, LOL ! (A few more numbers and you could double enter this in the number challenge, heh)

Ana, thanks. In keeping with the impetus behind the challenge, I&#8217;m going for a slightly &#8220;Pulp Fiction&#8221; feel. It did a great job at mixing humor with the seriousness of the situations. Hopefully I can pull it all off in the end.<br />Mistress, I thought the same thing at one point. Didn’t mean for so many numbers, they just came through.

D’oh! Why didn’t I spot the “Pulp Fiction” in this?! Now I’m really impressed. :p

@Ana, clearly because I didn’t do nearly a good enough job.

I slammed on the brakes just as he put the burger to his mouth, causing him to get a face full of Whopper. Great line, totally unexpected, love it!