This is an interesting, darker, parallel to Reaper. I like it so far.
“Its purred in words like silk,” doesn’t quite read properly though.

Freaky, but gripping. I think your use of imagery has improved.

Thanks kaellinn! The next piece is gonna be rough on people.

very dark

Minor correction (I think), should diner be dinner?

Good series, seems like ages since i read anything dark on this site.

Very cool second installment.