Bravo! I love how you described what Becca was thinking and how her jealousy was kicking in when Jameson was so smooth with the hostess and then also when he gave Prandi a hug.

I love it, a little back in time from Becca’s perspective to explain why the girls were hanging on Jameson’s every word when Paul showed up.

wow amazing. You can almost see the wheels turning in beccas head. Metaphorically speaking. Your well described situation puts you front and center. You really get a feel for things in her perspective.

Very different tone here, quite the scene. Not sure I’m buying the turn around from Becca, but I guess love can make you kind of goofy.

Should have said this 22 hours ago, but you got sequel!