Poor goon. I loved that last line, very condescending and angry.

I like this, John. Now that Jen is gone I am actually quite glad, maybe she was a bit too much of a complication and split the narrative a bit.

Now we can focus on our hero, and his mission

Toasting other people’s characters… tisk, tisk, tisk… LOL , Just Kidding. Another great piece

About time that chick melted like she was supposed to! Women. Pshaw! Fun story you guys got going here.

Time to introduce another girl.

@Pyro, well, Phil is married, so she could always come back; but we kind of wanted to get away from the family aspect of it for a while. You never really know what’s going to happen though.
I know I certainly don’t. I don’t even know what’s going to happen when I start writing one of these. I start with one or two words and hope to holy heck that something comes to me. I’m nowhere near as creative as some folks here. I’m hoping some will rub off on me by association.

i like the ending.. it gives the story a twist of humor. Good work!

I added a sequel. A bit uninspiring in itself, but I hope I left you something interesting to build on in the next chapter :-D

I love how he chides the weeping goon there at the end. Tremendously fitting last line.

hey i ws expecting you to say MAROON instead of moron.lol