Good follow up. Very nice first line.
You used “died” in the last line. Should be “die.” Also, I’d switch to “still lying in the corner.”

Cool stuff, man. Horror’s not my thing, but I’m enjoying the series you have going. You’re really showing a lot of versatility on here, between the Mobius Strip, the 80’s string and this one. Keep going!

Thanks Jon… Ficlets are like candy coated, crack cocaine sprinkled, hot buttered popcorn with ice cold beer, LOL !
Seriously, this writing stuff in new to me (aside from boring technical writing for work) and I’m on a writer’s high.
The horror stuff is different for me too. I more like the hard Sci-fi pieces. Just trying to play with a few styles and push my comfort level.

I like this horror story.

A very nice post-mortem for the death scene in the previous one.

I like the guilt in the shower, I found it very believable.

Another good entry, I look forward to the next instalment