Comments on Bagman: Big Mistake by JLaughter

John Perkins

Nice twist here. Really fantastic dialog as well. Reads very realistic.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:55.
KevMullins

As John said… spot on perfect dialog here. This story is really moving right along. Your doing Mr Gibson proud Jon. :)
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:56.
JLaughter

Thanks guys. More’s coming on this. Probably today. Just slowed down a bit on it again.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:56.
Browncoatben

Great redirect! Looks like benny got played.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:56.
Browncoatben

Great redirect! Looks like benny got played.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:56.
Browncoatben

Great redirect! Looks like benny got played.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:56.
Browncoatben

Great redirect! Looks like benny got played.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:56.
Browncoatben

Sorry…iphone browser goof.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:27:56.