haha, this is great. Love the last line.
It would be a little easier to read if you start a new paragraph every time someone new is talking. It takes up an annoyingly large amount of characters but it helps readability and comprehension.
I’m exceedingly curious about what he’s written about…

Ok, so I just reread my comment and decided it didn’t make any sense at all. (Ha, me and my lack of communication skills) I meant that it would be better if you hit enter before the other person starts talking, even though it takes up a lot of characters. I think that’s worded better… lol.
I’m looking forward to seeing where this will go!

Oh! and it’s cute the way he knew she was blushing (and I like that she talks to herself… very relateable wink wink lol.)

i agree with dreamer =]

That is one swoon-worthy last sentence!