Thank you for entering Sarah. That is a simple and beautiful picture. And it doesn’t have any ugly twists in it.

painted a beuatiful picture of a bride on her wedding day, vividly done, the futzing(fussing/fixing) with/of the dress added a nice touch

Nice details, get repetitive at the beginning of the last paragraph, but otherwise a nice picture.

A very nice picture. Other than two incorrect uses of the word “it’s” and the repetitive use of the word “finally” towards the end, this is well done.
Also, I’d suggest adding a comma between “smooth” and “creamy.”

I really loved the last sentence, and this presents an overall beautiful tableau. Every bride is beautiful on her wedding day! :)

I really loved the last sentence, and this presents an overall beautiful tableau. Every bride is beautiful on her wedding day! :)

Sorry, didn’t mean to double-post!