Honestly, the idea to use Alice in Wonderland references never crossed my mind until you brought it up… duh! Your turn! :) Can’t wait to see what you do with this.
Some edits: 1) “Reaquire targets and stay out of sight…” 2) I believe the typical insult was “What is your major malfunction,” a la Full Metal Jacket (even though the movie didn’t come out until 1987, but this is Ficlets!). If you’re having space issues, drop something else instead of the major. That is required! I’m loving this series.
Good job of bringing in the code names and moving the story way forward. The addition of another time traveler is great, especially one who seems to be on the lookout for Alex.
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