This is a direct response to the following comment by PyroPunk 51 on Sarah M Conrad’s entry. I hope that it addresses the stated issue.
That is a simple and beautiful picture. And it doesn’t have any ugly twists in it.

“Take a picture, it lasts longer,” is truly a true saying. I like the picture you painted with your ficlet. Nature can be intriguing, and I myself relax when I look at pictures of waterfalls and such. Good job!

I love how you animate everything in the scene. It’s a very peaceful scene. Lovely.

beautiful John. a murder of crows I’ve not heard that phrase in a looooong time. Well done.

Thanks for entering John.

I had forgotten about that phrase, a “murder” of crows. Wow. It’s really well incorporated here. Fantastic imagery.