I have read this a few times and every time it gets better. Like the presentation- guess its a series and want to know more. Is it a murder mystery? at any rate, good job. nicely crafted/

I once knew some guys who got into a knock down draggout fight and busted a hole in their apt wall because they were fighting over who ate the box of captain crunch.They were in their thirties.

nice :-)

i will extend it when i get home from canada.