Oh past love interest perhaps? 5 years ago, 18 now that means she was 13 when she last saw him. Perhaps her first love? Very interesting. You have a couple of grammatical errors that make reading it a bit diificult (especially towards the middle). You might also like to try breaking the one giant paragraph into smaller ones. Its easier to read. Besides that you’ve got an interesting story you’ve started here, Good job.

the idea’s cool, but the writing seems kind of underdeveloped. add some more description, and try to be more consisent. like for the whole “yea sabbs” shouldn’t that be in quotes. and also, try to fix more of the grammatical errors and break up the paragraph