I was not expecting you to change this. I like that you made Mike some lame frat boy looking for a chance to party. Definitely another good entry. Not sure that having him kill Mike is the best way to go. It’s hard to get behind a character who kills innocent people.
No, he doesn’t. And I don’t mind Phil killing people, just only when he has to. I’ll come up with something. Mike may or may not die, I’ve got ideas that work both ways.
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