Nice job taking it internal, making things more quiet.

this reminds me of The Host / Tom Riddle in Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets.

intersing…

@ i_d: Now that I think about it, it is a lot like the whole Tom Riddle thing from Chamber. I never thought of it like that before.

wow… is there gonna be like a war between the two sides, all in her head??
thats freaky
awesome job!!!

I never considered that… it’s entirely possible. It may not work in this series, but I could do another thing similar… have some figments interspersed throughout other people’s stories, probe into the characters’ conscience… That would be pretty sweet, actually. Thanks for the suggestion =)