I really like how you’ve given this character some real depth. You can see that she defines her existence through material possessions. Nice continuation on the theme from the first one. Two quick notes. The first is that it’s Neiman Marcus. Very minor, but I noticed it, and I shop at Target. =P Also, you start 7 out of 18 sentences with “she” or “so she.” I would love to see more creativity in this area. It will help with the “flow” of the story. That sort of repetition can be jarring.
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