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Good beginning. Very nicely sets up the conflict between the narrator and her family in regard to the “wasting” of talents. You could stand to spell-check it, though. I suggest using one Firefox 3 with its built-in as-you-go spellchecker.

Good beginning. Very nicely sets up the conflict between the narrator and her family in regard to the “wasting” of talents. You could stand to spell-check it, though. I suggest using Firefox 3 with its built-in as-you-go spellchecker.