Comments on From Inside The Wonderball part 2 by Phil Sporlan

PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

Nice twist. Teensy edit: “begisn” should be “begins”
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:31:11.
Sailor Emo

gah! When I read the ” I like to keep my visitors” i was like RAPE !!! RAPE !!!! CREEPY OLD GUY !!!! lmao the whole time.
But wouldn’t that be wierd if Dana started reading and suddenlyy…
RAPE …RAPE!… Jk!
LMAO
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:31:11.
Bartimaeus

LOL sailor emo!!!! XD
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:31:11.
Hunting Beauty

LOL sailor emo! That would be funny.

Awesome job on this ficlet. You did a great job of painting the picture of what is going on. I can picture the look on Emily’s face when the guy said “I like to keep my visitors for a few years”.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:31:11.
Flute Loop<33

I can’t believe she’s willing to bring her brother into this…. thats creepy! along with the old guy =]
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:31:12.
LovingYourHeartbreak♥

hahaha creepy old guy.
GO CHRIS !!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:31:12.
wytherwings

old guy… dumbledore…
ok done.
what now…
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:31:12.