Nice. Get the explanation out in the open, now what do our heroes do with this info? Hmm… Two points. I think “As the result chemical spill” should be “As the result of a chemical spill.” And the last sentence should be “your memories.”
John, man you guys are quick today… I just posted it and was reread for errors. Nice catch as usual.<br />Pyro, 1984 has long been established as the date they are stuck in. It’s been noted several times. Also Jen noted that Final Countdown didn’t really work because it was from 1986. She used it the same way I used a Gibson story… creative license. :)
Yea! Glad we got that portal explanation out of the way… . About the Final Countdown thing, I knew the setting was 1984 from earlier in the series, but since the agency has been dealing with “travelers” I thought it would make for “forgivable” slip of the tongue. ;) . Now, thinking cap time……
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