Man, Becky has NO sense of adventure. Great use of dialog here.
a) Great definition of paradox… in both places. I really wanted to work that into my piece but alas, no roomb) I agree with John, great dialogc) Another great addition!
Seems to me Becky has nothing to loose! Brilliant dialogue. Loved the reference to Back to the Future!
John Perkins
KevMullins
PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)