Wow… fantastic story and I think a really great entry into the challenge.

Ooh, did not see that ending coming. Great job on the out of order, jumping backward and forward.

Really awesome entry into the challenge! This was a great read, and I did not expect the ending one bit.

Well, hopefully she didn’t die so that she can find Stu and kick his arse.
Great entry. Very entertaining and well done.

yeah, I agree with John. Stu is a…well, I can think of many words, but let’s just say if she does die he won’t be at her funeral, and if he is, I hope he gets beat up. :)