Great final line!
I wonder whether you wanted to continue the first paragraph? It ends with a single “I” and no double quote! Great job, building suspense.
Major suspense! I can’t stand it! And, what was with the single “I” in the second paragraph? I’m curious now!
thebetweenspace
PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)
g2 (la pianista irlandesa)