In the 2nd sentence “where” should be were, welted=wilted
3rd sentence should be “came INTO my life” right?
And in the last sentense it should be
“so you could be the rain a I a radiant flower”
No tbeing mean! I’m just trying to help out =D
lovely poem! I hope to see more! (Im adding you as a contact by the way).

Gah sorry! When I said correction in 3rd sentence i meant 4th

beautiful poem, wondeful imagery and it flows nicely=].