The legalese seems a bit too simple. I know the 1024 limit, but maybe you can still make it more “real”?

Nice—it really made me laugh.

Forty years is such a long time… for a human.

Man, it’s always in the fine print. Nice job continuing the demons business like approach to it all, no fuming, no gnashing of teeth, just calmly pointing out the facts of the contractual agreement.

@Pyro, I agree, but I had to make some concessions for the limit. It took some finagling to get what I have here to fit. I could have made it more authentic, but I would have had to leave out some of the other stuff. Although, some of the language is lifted directly from a sample lease I found online. You’d be surprised at how simplistic some of them are, especially when they don’t have the money to hire a real attorney to write up the agreement.

I really enjoyed the demon reaching into a puff of smoke. Good entry! Now I am going to have to go and read the prequel to see what is happening here.

LoA