Gripping and downright chilling portrayal of this sort of scenario and mindset. You jumped a bit back and forth there from first to third person, might be worth correcting.
=/ i wrote something like this. you said it it wasn’t my voice, it was the devil’s. the is the same case. and i was happy to read the part where you said “i knew it wasn’t true.” for many reasons. please just..call me or something everytime you feel the need to..do this.
I’ve done that once… it was scary. Not the cutting part. I meant having that kind of voice. This ficlet really tells what people go through. That’s what I like about this.
i like your writing, but the people who say this is an accurate potrayel of whats going through a cutters head must ghave never cut. Its not like that really. I would know. it was a good shot though.
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