Good for her. Always a tough situation and a nice job telling it from her perspective without absolutely villainizing him in the moment. Yes, he’s a jerk, but you manage to convey how pitiable he comes across at this moment, perhaps the most powerful weapon in the arsenal of the abusive boyfriend/husband/girlfriend/etc.

I agree with THX , but need to add there are a few errors in puncuation, and you might edit ”,had to be dragged to be escorted ” as it is a little misworded.