It’s amazing the number of ficlets I see that are related to suicide in some way.
Overall, I like this little poem.

yea its about my best friend who just tried to kill himself

I’m sorry to hear that. Sometimes people come away from those experiences as better people, learning from what drug them down to those depths, and working through the pain to find happiness. I know that I did.
I hope that your friend is doing better, and that he is getting the support he needs.