Holy cow; MAJOR twist alert! Catigory 5! (wait… mixing up tonadoes and hurricanes, sorry) But still! This is insanely insane! It explains a lot, it sets up for a lot… ay estrellas mias! I’m going out of my mind right now! (I don’t know if you could tell)

very nice job, it makes the my Ed story seem so much better, great stuff

i agree w/ g2 & phil

ok, whoa.

Great twist. Wonderfully written. just wow…

wow…