Anyone care to hazard a guess which of my kids’ Disney movies was sitting on the couch as I stumbled for inspiration?

Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs?
Cool entry. I knew it wouldn’t work out for Pedro (it never does), but the actual twist was very well done. Unexpected and extremely entertaining.
Thank you very much for entering. I’m glad you were able to find a few minutes to steal away from writing your novel. No go write another sequel to “Castle in the Air.” =P

Hey, the ball’s in pen’s court on that series. :)

Funny stuff from start to finish. Great idea for the twist.

That there may be a never-ending twist. I agree with the other’s great job.

Groundhog day here we come!

This is the story that does not end….
It just goes on and on my friend!
Some people started telling it
not knowing where it’d go
And they’ll continue telling it
forever just because
This is the story that does not end…

sorry, now I’ll have that song stuck in my head…crap.

Agh!

You had to sing the song…

Now it’s stuck in my head, too…

Great twist!

damn you infernal lamb chops damn you all to hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good story too