Cool. Totally fits in with the season given that Father’s Day is tomorrow. Nice little twist at the end as well. I love twists.

Wow, that was truly a cool father’s day story. dad’s kinda bitter, son mustn’t visit much.. very detailed, can see the scene in my minds eye.

wow.. kicking a dog.. not cool. Whats making pops so grouchy?? was fathers gift hand made?

The sun is the black sheep of the universe. I love that line.

Bit of a twist on it too. Pun/double meaning to ‘sun’, maybe?