Chaos would come of this, but chaos meant opportunity. Great line that aptly sums up every thought before it in Cole’s mind. And now I brace myself for what’s to come!

Another awesome entry into this really superb series. Seriously though, do you get some macabre joy from making the rest of us look like amateurs? =P

I agree with John. I think you enjoy making us look like amateurs. I think you see it as your calling in life. LOL

But in all seriousness….. THAT ROCKED !

I like the idea of chaos leading to opportunity. Huh. Also, where you write “the semi-dark of the house,” I think “semi-darkness” works better with the syntax of that sentence, but if you can’t spare the characters, who cares. This is still brilliant.

another exellent edition to this series

My goodness, I envy your skills. Brilliant work.

@Ana, thanks for the correction. Grammatically you’re right, so I fixed it, as I had just enough characters.

@everyone else, garsh, but you guys are way too kid. I’m blushing like a school girl over here. Puh-lease! And thanks.

It seems like you’ve never noticed how much of a ficlet god you are… I’ve never been disappointed by your writing. This series is as stunning and as intricate as either a persian rug or a tapestry (my brain is similie-dead right now, so might as well use both). Estrellas mias, you have a gift my friend.

I liked the image of “thoughts like butterflies” and relating that to the butterfly theory is sheer brilliance.