A bit cheesy at the start, but back true to form for the ending there.

ha ha a dance off.. too funny. Prandi competing aginst Sassy. Too cool. For some reason Karl reminds me of the barfly from the simpsons… just a thought :) love what youve done with this series

I thought THX was right and edited the first half a bit to make it a little less cheesy, hopefully.

hahaha…I love the ending the most here, thought the whole ficlet was good, because of the picture I got in my head of Jameson’s face when Prandi threw him her jacket and then her face when he fell off of his stool.

Karl is great, and Prandi keeps being so surprising. I think this series is most definitely in my “must keep reading” list.

You’ve got sequel! And awesome job becoming one of Ficlet’s Featured Authors, man! =)

haha…that was funny..