I love their interaction at the end (very funny) and you described the scene well throughout.

Looks like Paradise or a beach. well told series interesting quirky zen master trent or brent..

WTH ? that question truly has no answer!

I love the setting and your characterization here is great.

I forgot to add – I hope you continue this!

@Ana, thanks again. It will probably be continued tonight, or tomorrow morning depending on your relation to GMT .

Killer descriptions, and Todd is a great zen master. Very magical location/non-location, artfully and smoothly described.