nice goin on this one… (If I could enter my own challenge, this was the song I was gonna use! coincidence???)
PS: My cousin Elsi thinks its the best one out there… have fun with the rest of your pieces and talk to you soon byee :)

This was quite lovely, incorporating some classic elements from the song while painting an entirely new level of tragedy to the whole scenario. Excellent!

Very nice. Gives the a different meaning behind the lyrics. I never liked the song until I heard David Cook sing it on AI. :/ But that’s just me. ;)

I’ll never be able to hear those lyrics in the same way again. This was very imaginative and lovely. I especially liked the part where she picks up the single grain of rice.

Ha ha! I had a sinking feeling this story was going to be on a Beatles song.. Without even looking at your tags.. I saw the title, and I thought to myself this must be a Beatles reference.

Aw, come on! What’s wrong with the Beatles?!

Thanks to everyone who likes this! I suppose I sort of knocked off Great Expectations, but Dickens has been dead long enough that I don’t think he cares….

this is one of my favorite songs from the Beatles.
Very tragic at the end. That seems to be a theme in this challenge!! hehe.. I love tragedy!

Great work!