I enjoy these moments where we learn more about what makes Prandi tick. I also enjoy the calm, soul-searching tone here as opposed to the mayhem that’s occuring inside the bar at the very moment.
I can absolutely relate to Prandi in this one. When I moved to Canada I went through a phase where I changed a lot about myself to try and fit in, and I went nuts over local history and such. My Grandparents would constantly tell me I was being ridiculous. Great entry!
I like how you did a back story piece about Prandi. It’s like we get a feel for who she is as a person. and not some person in the bar. Great story. Excellent development of her character.
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