I love the duality inherent within the piano player’s character, which is evident in the clarity and darkness both present in her eyes. And I really liked the turn of the phrase: _Her hands slid across the keys of the piano like rainwater down a window on a stormy day. _

I liked the line about ‘if you saw them…’ and the whole idea about playing with emotion but not her own. Lovely, evocative and stylish piece.

I love the comparison of her playing with the rainwater trickeling down the window and the description of her eyes. Nicely done. THUMBS UP

Lovely, lovely descriptions.